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This is a song i am currently writeing for a shock rock band, Deadsong, i am in. it isn't finished yet, but here it is so far.



{verse 1}

My wrist,

Your blade,

My eyes see your pain,

You ordore me NO!,

I yell back just Go---------!,



{chorus}

Get out,

Go home,

Just leave me the fuck alone,

My blood,

Your tears,

If no one else cares,

Then why---------,

should I---------,

Just leave me alone to,

Just leave me alone to,

Alone to,

Die------------!



and thats it so far, more to come later.

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evilsandwich
08:43 Jul 19 2009

it would be an awesome song ^_^

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madamefate
05:03 Jul 30 2009

I hope you keep writing on it, I like it so far

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AlkalinaCobain
13:36 Jul 31 2009

good keep up the great work

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lordfawn
12:10 Aug 10 2009

Rock out loud!! Sweet!!

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masterwolf
07:24 Sep 23 2009

very good

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shadowviper
20:47 Oct 07 2009

thats badass i like your writing style. i used to write like that when i was 13 but then again ive been writng for about 4 yrs now .... but anywayz love the chorus ! i wrote a poem with the same title yrs ago but i cnt rmmbr how it went... someday i will. lol. so yea dont stop writing your good at wat u do. :)

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